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It makes you feel so good, so complete
it makes you be yourself,
and it leaves you astonished,
and then you do not know what to do,
for it is so magnifiscent,
for it makes you,
for it rules your heart,
and it makes you feel confident,
is no common place,
but when you are there,
you just feel like home,
you just feel so comfortable,
that you wish never to leave,
it will always remain in your heart
like the pictures of the past.
And then, when you are gone,
every time you remember Lorien,
You love it so much
that the only feeling makes you tremble,
makes you cry,
but then, you realize that it will always be there
, in your heart,
for it began there, and it will end there...
(Mensaje original de: Arien)
it makes you be yourself,
and it leaves you astonished,
and then you do not know what to do,
for it is so magnifiscent,
for it makes you,
for it rules your heart,
and it makes you feel confident,
is no common place,
but when you are there,
you just feel like home,
you just feel so comfortable,
that you wish never to leave,
it will always remain in your heart
like the pictures of the past.
And then, when you are gone,
every time you remember Lorien,
You love it so much
that the only feeling makes you tremble,
makes you cry,
but then, you realize that it will always be there
, in your heart,
for it began there, and it will end there...
(Mensaje original de: Arien)
#1 Respondiendo a: Anónimo
It makes you feel so good, so complete
it makes you be yourself,
and it leaves you astonished,
and then you do not know what to do,
for it is so magnifiscent,
for it makes you,
for it rules your heart,
and it makes you feel confident,
is no common place,
but when you are there,
yo...
que lindo! se me han saltado las lagrimas
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felicitaciones, es un excellente poema.



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